My favorite place to visit is commonly found. There are perhaps billions in the country, and I go to the one in Neah Bay everyday. I go there to play basketball, and it is just a calming place. I love how it can clear my mind and I can get better at basketball being there. It's a big facility and a lot of people go, from toddlers to seniors. Sometimes they host community dinners, or even wedding receptions there. Honestly it's an all purpose kind of place, with a generator so when the power goes out (and it always does) we are able to still go there and play basketball.
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Give me more---you want to explain to the reader the vivid details, imagery. This is more of a tell post and I have so many unanswered questions! What does it look like? Smell like? Sound like? Feel like? Descriptive writing can be tough, but getting outside your comfort zone is a must when it comes to this type of writing.
ReplyDeleteIt might just because I am often in Neah Bay, but the place is kind of obvious, but I like how you described the many purposes of the place
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